Fiction Editing

Your story, Clarified

Writing a novel is a big undertaking. A good editor can help you see what’s working, where your story may be losing momentum and where your characters, scenes and prose can become stronger.

I work with independent authors on fiction from early drafts through publication, providing developmental, line, copy, and proofreading services. My goal is to help you shape the strongest version of your story while preserving what makes it yours.

Developmental Editing

A developmental edit looks at the story as a whole.

I can help you identify and strengthen:

  • Plot and story structure

  • Character development and motivation

  • Pacing and tension

  • Point of view

  • Scene structure

  • Conflict and emotional beats

  • Continuity and story logic

You'll receive thoughtful, practical feedback designed to help you understand both what is working and where your manuscript could be strengthened.

Line & Copy Editing

Once the story is working, I can help refine the writing itself.

I look at:

  • Sentence structure and flow

  • Word choice and clarity

  • Dialogue

  • Repetition

  • Grammar, punctuation, and usage

  • Consistency and continuity

  • Readability and rhythm

The goal isn't to make your writing sound like mine. It's to make your writing sound like your voice, but clarified.

Proofreading

For a manuscript that is ready for publication, proofreading provides that final careful check for errors and inconsistencies before your book goes out into the world.

Genres

I have experience and interest in a range of genres, including:

Romance • Mystery • Thriller • Historical Fiction • Science Fiction • Young Adult

I also work with emerging and independent authors who want an experienced second set of eyes on their manuscript.

A Collaborative Approach

I believe editing works best as a conversation between author and editor. Your story belongs to you. My role is to ask the right questions, identify opportunities, and help you make informed decisions about your manuscript.

I bring formal editorial training, experience working with fiction writers and a genuine respect and passion for your stories.

Let's make your story as clear and compelling as possible.